The second "baby" was in late but...
And the second baby has arrived as well! I got the second proofread from Ian Montgomery who did a superb job, not a mere proofread. The text has been revised according to the grammar but, moreover, also to the contents!
Ian added a huge amount of notes about several aspects of the text: comments about marketing/purpose of the game, comments on the rules mechanics, comments on possible options for different resolutions of the rules. In a nutshell, a complete revision being a 360° analysis! …and to complete it, Ian also added some pages with overall recommendations and hints: he had not only done a proofread, he did acted as an editor!
My huge thanks to Ian are absolutely a must! …now the tricky part is trying to carry out a combo of corrections + rediting of the text… the task is not as smooth as I thought…
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